Wednesday, 30 March 2016

Scribetime

Hey bloggers this is my second Scribetime I'm not very good at them but here it is (before I start this the photo I'm writing about "I would not want to be doing this"


I walked along the bridge following everyone else as they slowly walked with me, suddenly someone in front of me snapped a plank on the bridge with no support on the side he fell on one of the planks that snapped as well which sent half of the bridges plank plummeting to the ground the man fell to dead instantly as he hit the ground all so being impelled by a stick it was so terrifying(and disgusting, shhh don't tell him I said that) nearly passed out which then would of killed the rest of us. I managed to stay on and keep balancing to the other side then fell to the ground frozen with fear of what I just saw.【o´゚□゚`o】

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Hi Alex!
Good to see another school related post on here :)
This is a great story but it was quite hard to follow the plot line because you kept switching subjects (or maybe that's just me) anyways other than that a great story with a great use of personal voice and adjectives :)
- Jasmin (=^-^=)